I. Introduction
a. Wherever one goes in the world there is bound to be a slum there
b. Slums are areas in mostly large cities with poor housing privacy and security.
c. People lve in slums because of poverty and they chose to live there. Also, slums can affect other people by igniting philathropic emotions.
d. First of all, people live in slums due to poverty.
II. First Point
a. The first reason why people lve in slums is because of poverty
b. "She lives here with her four children, her husband and her in-laws. All eight of them are crowded into a one room shack."
c. The quote shown above says that people move to slums because of poverty and shows lifestyle conditions due to this poverty.
d. The second reason why people live in slums is because they decide to live there in the first place.
III. Secondly, people live in slums because they made up their mind to move somwhere else and possibly end up in a slum.
b."People move not because they will be better off, they move because the expect to be better off."
c. The quote above shows that the people who live in slums might have come from poor villages looking for a better opportunity in life and ended up in a slum just trying to get a new fresh start to their lives.
d. The last point to bementioned is how do slums affect the human population around the world. Sounds like psychology and it probably is.
IV. The final point defended here is how do slums affect the human population around the globe outside of slums themselves.
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d. This final point shows how human populations outside of slums are affected by slums themselves.
V. Conclusion
a. (see above for hook)
b. (see above for thesis)
c. Think about it for a moment... Many people from slums came originally from poor vilages in search for new hope in life but could not find it at all. So would they be better off in the villages they came from (in the form of standard of living)?
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